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November 01, 2006
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A positive aspect of your Civil War Photo Essay is that it is put together very well. The pictures are in great order and the paragraphs that go with it are well written and well thought out. Some things that needed to be worked on though were, first the introduction could have been more about the 54th Massachusetts Assault. You could have gone in more into the introduction into the insight of why it was important and lead up to the pictures you were going to show in your album. Second, when citing sources remember to cite paraphrased sentence too. Lastly, I don’t see the need for the movie Glory to be in the album. If it were a historical picture I would understand adding on another picture but it doesn’t make the album flow correctly by putting in historical pictures than a photo from a movie even if it is relevant to the topic.
Posted by: Margaret | November 04, 2006 at 11:11 AM